Interesting

Your percussion needs some serious attention, it sounds... not good.

The bass is almost oppressively loud.

Your arps are pretty cool, though they kind of show up and dip out really quick. Those transitions could use some attention I think.

There's a significant amount of clipping going on here that makes the song really unpleasant to listen to when there's a large number of instruments going at once.

The piano feels pretty muffled, it'd be nice to hear it brighter.

The overall texture of the song feels like all of your instrumentation is fighting for room. Work on your panning, composition and EQing to make this less of an issue.

Oh man fix that clipping.

The percussion sounds are definitely very false sounding.

I wrote this while listening to the song, so if it seems disordered, that's why.

I really can't comment on the composition because of the technical flaws. Sorry I couldn't be more positive, but the clipping and mixing REALLY need to be addressed. I would like to hear more rhythmic variation in your bass, eighth notes get very, very boring.

An upbeat,Hopeful track, with a few minor flaws

First order of business is to say that while this may be made for christian rock, Tha shouldn't influence anyone (for good or bad) when reviewing the music. Christian rock my not be your cup of tea (It certainly isn't mine) but genre shouldn't be looked at as a detriment to quality.

That said, there are some flaws inthe song that hold it back from fully shining. First off, as onlllnk19 said, the percussion need to be tweaked. It's just a bit overpowering. Also, the bass ( and the cello? at the end) need to be looked at. The notes sometimes blended together with the percussion, so that you couldn't make out which nowte you were trying to hit. also, and this is personal opinion, it felt a little long.

On a positive note, I loved the keyboards, and even the phaser-y effect you used on some of the instruments worked well.

You're on your way to creating something very good. Cheers! :D

oh kewl!

i think this sounds great for a christian rock song. the percussion is overpowering the lead and not in the best of ways. it kinda makes it sound messy. but yeah man lyrics are definitely needed in this. keep at it man!