emotion.....

well it sure as emotion, but it may lack the work to give that emotion to others

first the song is repetitive, I know its supposed to be calm and all,but you got to see people in ng don't see things this simple

also know you show some progression, some notes of the syth that comes by the middle don't seem to flow with the rest of the song

you could had change the lead rhythm at least one time, probably by the middle

the fade out was nice by the end

in general its shows originality, so to help i'll five this ^^

from the darkness in the review request club, Dkrd.....2000 xD

Why hi there...

Hello again, After having listened to Sp@rk I figured I should try out your other submitions aswell.
I am going to start of by saying that this is one of the best ( original ) melodies I have heard in quite some time.

Why the "low" score then? Well, the thing is that atleast I can't let you off the hook with just a great melody.

I understand that you probably performed this they way you want it to be and I respect that, however I do not exactly share your vision on this one. Your reply to me on sp@rk said that you had problem with putting emotions into your music but I cannot agree. This piece is filled with emotion, but to be honest, your choice of "instruments" and strings ( please don't flame me, I don't know that stuff, only what I want XD ) for this entry didn't mesh at all with the theme nor the melody of it.
Please do not abandon it though! Not to seem like I lack imagination but I am going to tell you the same thing here as I did on Sp@rk. Remake this, Please!

It's too good to be left in the dark. Try remaking it with something more classic like a piano or something fluteish... or both. Anything to make it feel more like an actual Lullabye.

PS: I looped this 6 times. How's that for quick-judging >:)?