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MH16: MAC9 #2 -Editable-

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Here's my 2nd MAC entry.
If you have any suggestions/tips/advice, please tell me in a review.

MH16

PS: You may have to turn your volume up a little

-Edit-
I did exactly what Zero123Music said in his review.
Thanks for the advice!
-Edit-
Thanks to blackattackbitch for the advice!
I hope the song is a bit better now :-)

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more epic....

the string work is amazing and a flute by the end was great ^^, the drums were ok, in general a good song....

FairSquare responds:

Thanks! :-)

hmmm

Use of syncopation is well thought of along with the additions of instruments throughout the piece. This time the ocarina seemed out of place. The snare could've been a bit more pushing. At about the 1:00 mark, the violin seems quite out of place in the piece. The ocarina sticks out unwelcomed in the piece. Doesn't work in loop. 3.5/5 7/10

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the review!

Very nice :)

You have a good sense of melody and a good understanding of harmony in a static key (staying in one key). My gripe with this is the way the themes just keep stacking on top of each other and don't seem to go anywhere and while the lines do work well together they don't flow all that naturally. Also you should try and add some contrary motion and dynamics as well as harmonic variety. This is just my opinion and ofc you should do as you feel right and you do compose great themes and melodies, it's just the underlying structures that make them a bit dull sounding to my ears. Keep making tunes and listening to great composers, you've got a good thing going here and if you are only 16 as your profile says, you're very well on your way!

FairSquare responds:

First of all: thanks! Reviews like this are so helpful.
And i totally agree with you, but it's pretty hard to make dynamic songs. My songs have gotten more dynamic, but i'm still not where i want to be.
I really appreciate your review!

MH16

Very well done.

It sounds really professional, this is a great track. My only question is what sound bank are you using? The instruments sound really alive.

FairSquare responds:

Thanks! :-)
I use Edirol Orchestra.

WHOA

HOLY CRAP I LOVED IT! GREAT DRUMS AND STRINGS! ONE OF YOUR BESTS!

FairSquare responds:

Thanks! :D

Credits & Info

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Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
10
Score
4.60 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 11, 2009
6:14 AM EST
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
4 MB
1 min 46 sec

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