I like the melody and your instrumentation. I think the drum machine is OK, too, but the entire production sounds "washed out". There is little low-end and your high-end is WAY too high. I'm interested in how you recorded this and what kind of post-production you did.
I recorded it live directly into my laptop using a tape recorder mic I bought for three bucks with Audacity. No post-production. In fact, the drums and the rhythm guitar part were recorded at the same time, then bass, then the solo. I have another version of this I'm going to post later with a different solo, the rest is the same.
Sounds like Classic Rock
It reminds me of like, a movie montage of a guy on a Harley going cross country, lol.
Thanks, would you believe it was written on a mandolin?