EDIT:

Updated it again. its even longer now, for about 4.20 secs.
I added another 1.30 min trance beat to it, and i made it 140BPM :D
Also added some harder bass and kick sounds,
and changed the riff.

wont be making new ones now.
my computer couldnt handle it anymore.
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I was breeding for hours on this song.
I already uploaded a test submission, and asked for your criticm.
And I made this out of your criticm.

I'm still happily suprised with the mastering, and ESPECIALLY with the last 1.30 mins.
It starts as some decent techno, which expands into some trance / ambient stuff.
after 1 min and 20 secs it changes to techno / industrial.
Again, im very suprised with the outcome, since i had lost hope already :P.

Worked for about 15 hours on this, and mastered it a lot.
Im also very happy with the mastering outcome.

So this song worked out better than i expected for sure ^^
Listen cool, Vote Fair, and Skip the first 80 seconds.

contains :

- Tons of filters
- Small trance rythm
- Many Trance Synths
- Many Techno Synths
- HardBass Kick (volume is decreased like hell, so you wont hear it anyway)
- MUCH variation. techno to trance to techno.

AGAIN :

it STARTS with TECHNO, mids with TRANCE, and ends with TECHNO ^^

take care,
St0rmChaser