only one improvement needs to be made to this:
ill tell you waht it is good sir: make it 3.5 minutes long. you are a music genius, and this sounds great! i love the way you progress the tempo while keeping a melody, it seems like its from a professional record company. again...PLEASE the only thing i hate about this is that now im going to have to hit "repeat" on my Zune to hear it again and again...please make it longer..its AWESOME