awwesome

i love it, its a really fluid transition between its verses,keeps your brain guessing whats next in the song :D

This is music!

Been awhile since I've stumbled across something I've liked from the get-go.

This tune is strange. The simple chord progression works well, and your melody is somewhat unfocused, but it seems to fit the meandering, yet structured feel. Nice blend of technique.

On the production side you've done well -- very well, in the mids and highs, not too harsh, not too muffled; smooth, instead. What's gotten away with you is the bass, yet the percussion cuts though perfectly.

If you still have the files for this, you might load it back up, slap in a limiter here and there, and maybe a highpass filter or just some EQ to tighten up the low-end slop.

All-in-all, quite good!