I liked it
I would only change the amount of reverb on that piano. And the hihat is a bit loud. If you have soundgoodizer, that can really help keep an instrument loud but quite (if that makes sense lol). For the visual you try to represent, I think it fits nicley. Other than the reverb problems, this is a very nice song. I especially love that part at about 1:10, Which I think you should definatly build on.
I always though that the reverb on the piano contributed to the atmospheric effect, but after showing it to a few friends they all say its too much, so I guess i'll turn it down :D
Thanks for the review
I actually like this song.
But the reverb on that piano really covers up most of the sound-scape.
I think it'd do real good with some dynamics.
Good work though. :)
Oh, the kick drum. Compress.
Hmmm very nice apps and effects here, nice Piano and patterns
However the HiHat instrument might be a little too dominating. Perhaps lower its volume a tad and bring up the Kick a tad more, other than that I find no issues here :3
the hat was raised a bit cuz it kept getting drowned out and I wanted it to stay apparent so dunno :p
thanks for checking it out!