I liked it
I would only change the amount of reverb on that piano. And the hihat is a bit loud. If you have soundgoodizer, that can really help keep an instrument loud but quite (if that makes sense lol). For the visual you try to represent, I think it fits nicley. Other than the reverb problems, this is a very nice song. I especially love that part at about 1:10, Which I think you should definatly build on.
Good job!