I made a bunch of tunes the other day and had a real hard time trying to build them into some kind of song... In the end I made three versions, and decided 'what the hell! let's make them a 3-part series.
This is Part 3, in my opinion the best one.
His food ran out 2 nights ago. He had tried to hunt, but got a long bloody scar up the length of his arm before he finally realized a boar was too difficult for him to catch. He tried for something smaller -a rabbit- but the scar stopped him from trying anymore hunting ventures.
So now he was left with nothing but a cracked mirror, an old photo, and a perfectly flat leaf. God knows why he kept the items he found on the edge of the cliff he woke up on. He felt something from them... He'd probably have to sell them next chance he got though. Selling them would put an end to his hopes of trying to find out who he was.
He stood on a cliff presently, wind blowing the disheveled clothes he wore. In the distance he could finally see his goal. A city. Though the reason he wanted to go to a city eluded him... He didnt even know what city it was.
He took a step towards the city.
Then it hit him.
It hit him hard.
Why he had a mirror, a leaf and a photograph.
He knew where he was going.
He knew his name.
He knew why he left.
He knew what he had done.
And most important, he knew what he had to do.
It was unfortunate therefore that a neat round bullet had hit him hard at the moment his realization hit him.
He began to stumble to the city below, towards a quickly gathering crowd.
As he stumbled and the world passed around him in a blur, he wondered what would happen to him at the end of his fall.
That's for you to decide.
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It's a very intense song. I like how it builds up over the time.
I also like the somewhat dark atmosphere of the song.
The beat is very nice and the melodies are good too.
But it sounds somewhat a little too random. I'm missing something like a leitmotif in this song.
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No real structure
But nevertheless, interesting to listen to. It has a variety of sounds and feeling to it. I thought the bell part at 2:18 was different. I liked that. But, it didn't really stand out much. Maybe add something more like an interesting bass line solo. Anywho, for what it was, it was a decent song.
C52
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Great looping
This piece is nice enough, but the way that you've managed to get it to loop so well on top of it is just the icing on the cake.
The start of it sounds like Tubular Bells by Mike Oldfield. The accompaniment by the organ / keyboard is very well thought out and played, as it adds another dimension to the whole portrayal. I would stress that unfortunately, it sounds like you've gone for the minimalist approach to variation, which is a real shame, as the result would have been so much better if you'd have added a little something extra to it.
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Excellent...
Definetly the best out of the series...A well thought out song with nice rythmn and a good tempo.... You are very good at making audio and I hope you make more soon :)
-RRC
kept me intrigued
quite a weird audio, there were a lot of changes in layers but not really tempo which i ok i guess.
this piece is also quite atmospheric and for me sets a weird scene i cant really describe but well donefor doing so i guess
nice work
7/10
Marsupial
RRC
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