This is what i have so far with this song. I'd very much like some feedback on what you guys think i should do with what i already have. i'm basically trying to find out how the sounds are working together, specifically with the bass that comes in around the 35 s mark.
Be as critical as possible, but try to tell me what you like about it too!
nice start!
cool song you got here with good sound quality. I would suggested dropping everything but the bassline when u continue it and then having everything come back with a stronger melody or if your feeling creative a whole new build up section. its really up to you but I like your start.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Limesauce 
