give it life!
Trancy pantsy, indeed! ;)
Basically, from what I've seen in some of your other works, I can give you this suggestion: practice with building up, playing with the tension, giving melody lines different roles in different parts of the song. I said it before, and I mean it. You got the talent to make catchy tunes: now for making them more alive!
3/5 (not really finished, is it?)
I like how you got straight into it and didnt mess around much with an intro, the sound effects were sharp and you were able to keep them bouncing with that rhythm.