pretty dang good

only thing stopping this from a 10 is the skippy gtr (could be the upload) in the begin., and it sounds like your vocalist is holding back a bit

sweet...but

music is sick...singing kinda weak...

I agree with everyone else

everything except the vocals are good in this song. I would say go for a more strong vocals. like the singer to killswitch engage or all that remains. When they sing clean vocals it has a strong feeling to it. i would say that kind of vocals would work perfect. other than that this is a cool song.

...hmmm...

....other then the 'whiny' vocals..its pretty good...work on the vocals man and you can go to a record company and sell this shit!

good luck!

amazing song.

ive been listening to ur others songs and i think that all ur songs r great, with great vocals and guitar/drums.