Cool

It's nice, I liked it.
Goodjob, =D

aaggh

i dont really like distortion on kicks, but they do have there place if your going for the gabber genre, buut this track is too slow to be gabber, gabber is like 180+bpm, somthin like that, this is around 140 i think

also, theres no melody man, i wouldnt even reccomend posting anything if it doesnt have some sort of melody, you got alot of drums, and some fx goin on, but ALWAYS have some melody, at least thats what i think

this could easily become a great gabber track, mabye even hardstyle if you pulled it off right, but i cant give this a good score, so i give you 5, and im not going to vote on it

you at least know how to compose basic things, i think you should just stick with songs for longer periods of time b4 posting, you know?