This song is mind blowing, I love those little chiffs that come in at 00:31
Aside from those few comments, its time to get serious.
I like the beginning, but it is a bit abrupt in a fashion statement kindof saying.
Your lead is chosen well, and nicely, bubbly and slimey works with this song.
Is that the lead or the bass? I can't tell, which is OKAY, but it would be awesome with a bass AND a lead.
I like those drums you have chosen, it's nice.
The ending is pretty cool, with that pad cutting off when it hits the high then norm note.
It's a great song though, 8/10 5/5
Thanks once again for a detailed review
I agree, it's one of my personal favourites (ie the ones I actually like)
I remember liking the way I made it, but I cant remember if I had a lead, bass or a lead with bass (it was over a year ago)
Thanks for your feedback
This rocked my socks
And I'm not even wearing any. Anyway, with the bad jokes aside I just want to say that Newgrounds has a bunch of un-reckongnized(Sp?) talent in the audio portal. Anyway I definately plan on using this in and upcoming game or cartoon. I just felt like telling you ahead of time. Your awesome and I hope to see more wok from you.
thnx dude, im happy 2 be recognised by someone at last, and cant wait for someone to use one of my songs in their flash, ill make sure to check it out
nice song carrot...
i would have chosen a different kick and a different clap for that beginning thing. i liked most of the notes and instruments, however, there was one kinda wah-wah synth in the back ground that was pitchy at times.
good transition in the middle, perhaps a little bit of reverb on the previous instruments to it though. (so its not there all alone) there was a cool knocking echoey thing that caugth my attention and fitted the song perfectly. i Liked the whole i dea of the song.
just a few things i would have done:
-added i short riff that repeats well
-and ended it a little bit better (it seemed too abrupt to me)
good catchy rave you got here, work on melodies, and you might want to tone the instruments down a little bit. ( make them softer)
5/5 and a 10/10 from me. I've got another one coming out today maybe, look for it if u have the time. And i also have an old account, BMC-audio. you can check out the songs there. (it is a shared account and my songs have mawkeetus written in the title)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.