I like it.
There were a couple moments that didn't have the same effect as the original song (such as the pause between the third verse and third chorus), but I think you did a really great job of capturing the spirit of Chasing Cars. I like this a lot. It's subtle, but pleasing and powerful.
Hm, I liked it! I found the volume to be fine, but I use headphones. And I did enjoy the instrumental feel to it, very nice.
Pretty nice :-)
You were right, the volume is a bit low. If FL did screw up the volume, is it because it sounds crackly, when you play it with high volume, in the program? If so, just export it anyway... the crackling will be gone, on the exported file itself. Or did you try turning up the master volume, in the "Mixer" window? Other than the volume, nice effort :-)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.