Not Trance. Ok?
ok, so its not trance, but i like the piano.
Nice tune but i'd change the synth
Could see this an RPG and its a nice tune but I dont know if this is really trance. Maybe it's just me but I don't like the synth too much. I think the tune could be captured better with something brighter and definatly more clearer.
I'd add some drums, supporting synths, or acoustic instruments if your looking for a trancy song.
Good job on the tune and excellent start to a song with great potential.