lol

love it, no critisizm.

Not a bad harmony

This tune is quite a nice love song, that expresses your feelings for Sarah in a slightly bizzare way.

I like the reference to the racial slurr and cliches. You've really worked hard on the lyrics - are you some sort of Wierd Al fan, perchance? I think that this would sound better with a little drums in the background, as this sounds like 3 voices singing to one acoustic and one electric guitar. Possibly throw a little bass in as well, but be careful not to overdo it.

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good song

the guitar was very well played, the lyrics were also good, bit funny too and stood out just as a love song should, could've done without the second vocalist, but maybe it doesn't sound as good without it, the abrupt ending suited the song and the solo was well placed, a great love song

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Pretty good

I liked it. The vocals were quite funny, obviously not having the greatest singing voice, this style suited ya. Very good. The guitar was pretty cool aswell. Just chords but didn't need to be anymore. There were a few off time moments but it's alright overall the song did what it needed to. Make you smile. Great job

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Good.

The vocals were done really nice and was obviously the main point of the song, but at the same time the guitar wasn't too bad in itself. Some good humor here, but at the same time it was a pretty good song. You had a decent little solo part there, but I was hoping for something just a bit faster I think. The abrupt ending was actually pretty fitting to the song. Overall, a pretty good job.

C52

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