Now its tracks like this that are exactly perfect but not exactly bad either infact i liked this because it was somewhere in the middle and started out decently. Hmm so nice sounds here seemed a little scratchy in the start in the backround it could be nothing but maybe something you can look into it, but i do like the sounds you have here with some nice effects aswell, not perfect but a good piece indeed. And to end things here on a good note, i did enjoy your piece here with its interesting style, the quality could be slightly better but overall this was notbad.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we are with some improvment ways and i hope that whatever i do suggest does help or atleast you look into them a bit, but anyways lets get to some improvments. So i did mention a couple of things that could be touched on for some better success, but there really was no issue's other then some quality ones and some slight static in the backrounds, other then that this was notbad.