Repetiveness kills.
You have distorted drums, a simple lead, and a couple of extra stuff in the background that do little to make this track stand out. The only variation you have is when you change the lead at around 2:05. You then decide to speed up the tempo without a reason and it just gets annoying. I don't see much effort put into this track to be honest :/
Keep practicing and good luck.
Thanks for reviewing one of my songs a week ago, I didn't have time to reply until now.