i could imagine this being more of a loop not a song because of how repetitive it is. it just sounds like not enough new stuff was added. but it was nice and long and some parts sounded like stuff i have never heard before which is new... i think thats good... but w/e. keep up the good work and try to work on the repetitive ness.
I know this song is repetative, I wrote it and sometimes is gets on my nerves lol, thats why I am going to go back and rework it because there are some elements of it that I like. Thanks for the review.