The beat isn't too original, and it does get repetitive, but a lot of it works.
Though the whole first part of the song does seem pretty useless as anything other than an overly long intro, (you could probably have started the whole thing at 1:50 and been just fine) the REAL song starting at 2:17 is much more smooth and coherant.
You kept it pretty simple here, and it's not a bad effort, I just feel that you could do with some editing in most of your tracks.
Oh, and if you have the time, would you please review my latest song?
Good point about the intro, I didnt realy like it either. I am still going to go back and work on the drums some more and do some other things to it. Thanks for the review, Ill be sure to check your new song to.