My second song remade.
This is my first song submitted on Newgrounds.
Imagine a happy day, with the sun shining. You are running in the sunlight.
The original version of this song is on my youtube channel.
Look up Halfangelreject or the name of the song to hear the original.
Enjoy!
-RetellaVII
P.S.: Please do not be rude. Constructive comments only, please. And please tell me what genre this should go in. I would appreciate it.
well here goes
its a good song but the beginning 1:28 mins keeps looping even though u added a bass line in there ( or drums or somethin ) too long of a loop and the rest of the song keeps doing it with different synths drums but hey maybe its the genra or something. its good like i said in the beginning but can be better in non looping sort of ways.
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I an glad you liked it at the least.
Thank you for the criticism, Craziekev.
I will be sure to keep what you said in mind, so the next time I redo this song, it will be better than this one.
Once again, thank you for pointing out the flaws!
I will be sure to eliminate them in the future. :)
Bye!
-Alan :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
RetellaVII 
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