Not to my taste.

I can't imagine any situation where someone would be dancing to this. the instruments came together poorly and there was no real, defined tune. Overall though, not to bad, nice little piece you got here. Keep up the work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Not really Industrial

The tune itself needs a little work, as it's quite basic - the melody loop needs some modulation, in order to give us some variation, which is supplied in short order towards the end of the tune, but I feel that it needs to go further along this way.

It's a good tune that almost carries the Caribbean feeling of a beat and the way that their life is more easy going than that of other countries which tend to have more of a hustle and bustle about themselves.

With a little more effort, this could be made really nice - it's on the cusp of something great.

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Repititve melody

The main melody gets very repititve after 30 seconds or so. I waited for the song to pick up, but sadly it just stayed the same. Even after the short drum break at around 0:30 the song continued with the same old boring main melody (which only changed slightly here).

So, this song definatly needs more varity!

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Unique...

In a sense of warped reality, the song has sort of a cosmic feel to it. Although the background rhythm got tiresome after the first 40 seconds or so. The end seemed a bit patchy as well. Add something in the nature of some dynamic and tempo changes. Sounded like you were experimenting with the ambient/tech/house themes. Good for you, if so. Other than that, it was pretty bland.

C52

~RRC~