good but true about the screech- crappily annoying

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Blah, Blah, Blah, repeating what you've already heard the beginning was terrible and kind of hurt my ears. The rest of the song at hand really didn't have much structure. It really didn't have very good transitions as well as things just kind of ran together.

Some of the sounds that you had did sound very good though and you do have a base to make a decent song if you work out a few kinks here and there.

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ook...

My god, what was that sound u used in the intro? It sounded like a monkey getting strangled by a constipated elephant (Again with the elephants...sry...).

well, aside from the intro, it still needs more work throughout as it alcked depth and a good melody in some parts. Drumloops were quite faint and plain adn didn't pick up the song.

You chose a great song to remix, but u didn't do qutie a good job as the original and the melody was way too repetitive, reapting itself every couple of patterns whereas Blackhole12 uses a wide variety of different patterns adn melodies.

Not a bad job though.

Darklight17
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That screeching sound has to go

Yeah, you really messed up the intro with that sound. At first I didn't even knew what hit me (or my ears to be more precisely). Luckily after the sound stops the song gets much better, but it still needs more work.

The beat you present here is very nice, but other than that there isn't much going on apart from two small parts where a melody plays. Other than that there's just some beats and nothing more.

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Needs work

Remixing a good song doesn't always make a better one :P

You took a really poor sound for the first thing to sample into this mix - what sounds like a windscreen wiper passing across a dry glass surface only serves to bring this track to it's knees! I can't believe that you thought it sounded alright and submitted it with this glaring error in it, to be perfectly honest.

I'm awarding marks for the parts of the track that you've stuck to and have made sound good - the melody and beat of the track are good sounds and they serve as a good backbone, but more work is needed to take it past this label of 'average' that it bears.

Perhaps more windows sounds could be added - god knows there's hundreds to choose from in a variety of styles and finishes, to boot. The world is literally your oyster for this kind of piece, surely.

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