get rid of the lyrics and then ill be happy... and elec guitar isnt sad...
I don't really think the vocal works well to be honest, but admire your style. How you lay the guitars in is just very good. A second voice (with lower octave) gives a weird feeling too.
Glad you liked it =). Thanks for the helpful criticism.
The simplicity of the first minute is amazingly lonely and sad.
To be honest I would have preferred that the whole song and don't like what comes after.
Also I would prefer just the filtered background voice. The foreground voice seems too... low quality and dispassionate and a bit overpowering.
The lyrics are ok. They don't grab me but at least they don't sound cheesy (which most do, tbh).
Anyway that's a lot of criticism, but I really do think the beginning is fantastic (!), and I would like to hear another version taking into account what I said. :)
Hmmm, the original version I had was only the filtered backround voice but as you can see (from past reviews) no one liked it or could understand it.
But now... Bad Man Inc. and you say you like the voice... i'm so confused! Can't please everyone I guess >_>... i'm still debating whether or not to change it back.
This is fucking sad as fuck. Maybe it wasn't the best quality, or the singing that great....but it just made me think of some poor fucker, no job, no money, no family, no hope. Sitting in his box, listening to this scratched up record on an old phonograph. Doesn't even really know what the song is anymore...but never even cared.
In essence, this is goddamn perfect. It made me fucking depressed...and not because of the "shittiness" as others have said....if you know what I mean.
I actually liked this version better than your other ones, cause it just had the vibe of depression and sadness. Truly man.
At 1:19 it kinda took away from the effect. If you faded out to there...or let it loop at 1:18, this would be the saddest fucking song ever.
I'm gonna go blow my brains out now.
OMG! Don't blow your brains out please!
Thankyou for the awesome review! It put a smile on my face. (Not because your depressed - but because the emotion I wanted to express got channeled)
This review had alot of influence on me - and if possible i'm going to try and do my best to use a voice changer in the final version while still having people able to understand the lyrics. I'll take everything you said to heart and do my best to put it in the final version.
So do you not like the synthesized version of this song? If you could PM me with some more detail I would really appreciate it seeing as I want to make this song as perfect as possible.
Thanks so much for the great review!
I'm not gonna say it's shit,
But I'm not gonna say it's the best I've ever heard. Maybe it's just that i don't like listening to screeching and random moaning... Either way, Interesting song?
Haha - alright then. Keep in mind this is only a DEMO... you should check out the second version.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.