Originally this was the second version of memories - another (improved?) demo. However, after creating the final version of Memories and submitting the file in place of the original demo because of the similarities I renamed this as the demo. I will still regard this as the second version for this commentary although out of it I will refer to it as the demo. I took all of the advice I got in my reviews. Some changes I made in this version were:

- Improved vocal quality by not using a voice changer.
- Sped up the whole piece to 120bpm.
- Lengthened the endind with my solo.

There were some other changes as well - but to be totally honest they were either from improvisation or by accident. Remember, this is still a demo so i'm just experimenting.

Please review honestly so that I can improve this to the best of my ability for the final version.

Lyrics:

Take a look around at what is left of what we built.
It has fallen apart to our memories - our memories.
Take this moment and put it in your pocket -keep it with all the rest.
'Cause in the morning your dreams will always leave you alone and feeling restless.

Please remember the times that I held you in the rain and in the snow.
'Cause without memories, there is nothing left to hold you from just letting go.