I think some of your best.

I personally think this is some of your best that I have heard so far. I really enjoyed the beginning of the song, but when the dance part comes in it's just completely random. Kind of fun and interesting to listen to, but still way too messy to be too enjoyable.

I think perhaps the dance part was a bit too fast and that there were a lot of sounds that just really sounded off key or sounded like they didn't really belong in the song at all.

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Sorry, but this will be very constructive

First of all, very bad choice on a beginning, in terms of instrument and melody choice. Having the piano hit that D note over and over makes the song sound extremely bland from the get go. Now I will say that it's hard to make a catchy beginning and end, but the main melody should have picked up from the get go to keep the listener interested.

Also, the choice of FL Keys was a really bad choice. You should have downloaded something like WST22FStein Grand Piano soundfont for the piano melody, that would have helped greatly.

When the dance remix starts, several problems present themselves to me:
1) Some of the notes are out of tune. I can't pick out which ones though because....
2) The song is too cacophonous. I can hear the notes that aren't in tune, but I can't individually pick them out. In addition, the melody is too fast and crazy to be followed by any human ears.
3) The song changes tempo too much to be danced to. It's closer to a techno song than a dance song.

And the drumbeat could use some significant improvement too. Although this is one of my weakest points as a musician, I would recommend that you improve the drum beat a bit. At the moment, the main drumbeat is simply a kick and a snare alternating every half a beat.

But there is one main thing I have to praise you for, and that's tempo control. I can't hope to control the tempo as well as you have in this song. Well done with that.

Also, the piano doesn't really blend with the beeps well. The sound landscaping needs a bit of work.

That pretty much sums up my review. I hope it was helpful a bit. If you have any complaints or questions, just shoot me a PM.

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(scooter the) holy cow

at the start it was like 'a piano solo again?' then near the middle it all of a sudden was like 'breack out the glowsticks and start raveing!!!!!'