Awesomsauce~
I don't even think you know me but I'm Sapphire on the VAA. It's nice to see that you're on newgrounds. I really want to see you in more stuff, and hopefully we can work together in the future. :)
I really don't have anything to critique because I think your voice range is pretty good as well as your acting ability. There's actually a project of mine that I'd like you to voice in but I have to see how things go~