Good...But...
The melody was great, but the drums sound too...plastic-ey? I don't know how to describe it. I think the drums should be a bit louder and bassier. The one major thing that bothered me were the drums. It just seemed like the tempo of the drums were way faster than the melody, like A game of catch-up. Like as if it weren't going flowing together. Maybe im crazy, but I'll give you a link to a site with some cool kicks and hi hats.