You should make it more "rock and roll" style. Rather than that,YOU' RE AWESOME MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I dont think you need to change a thing.
Has potential, but needs to be polished
The thing that stands out most in this song, and that has to take a step back is the drum you're using (bass drum?) it intrudes too much on the other instruments. Also you need to bring forward the guitars in the beginning a little bit more, they are too silent as they are now. from 50 seconds onwards you have to be careful not to play the harp sound too high, because I can hear the sound crackle from time to time, which indicates that the sounds adds up and becomes too high, tone them down a little bit. Also add different drums like hihats and maybe snares now and then, which plays together with the bass drum. All drawbacks in this song is purely Productional and I always give 5 points for the production and 5 points for the performance. I think the performance is great if you just follow my advice. 5.5/10, 3/5
i like it!!!!!!!
it is hard to resist to dance to the beat, it is also hard to stop listening alot
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