Very nice, dude. :) Keep it up.
lacks a guitar
needs sum grudge
yeah it's missing somthing maybe a litte guitar would be better!
It's ok, but it's missing something, and I just can't seem to put my pick on it....
Nah it's just lacking some stuff.
It's also too simple somehow, you need to have more of a beat.
That's why this song is a really good one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.