Good

Very good first-try on R&B! Try to make it a little louder, and it will sure do great as it grows older!

allmost

If you wanna make a hip hop bass you don't put 3 behind each other like a techno bass...between every bass there is a pause and on the 4/4 and 1/4 there is a bass(kick)... 2 or 3 kickbass max in a 4/4 rythem and some snares...hithats don't really matter...fast or slow or not...

bass .... pause ... bass snare ... pause ... bass/snare ... pause

something like that

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for the rest good try