Interesting

So I have to say this was an interesting sound you here seems like it lacks some depth within it maybe even adding some deep drops and build ups would be a huge plus, anyways nice sound kind of like for a game of sorts, anyways nice work indeed.

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it lacks some depth within it maybe even adding some deep drops and build ups would be a huge plus

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hmmm sorry mate no melody rhythm is horrible too

yea, what i said.

randomized and hard to listen to

There's no melody. If you used Reason to make this you randomized the music pattern and didn't really put any effort in it, besides the choosing the sound :P I suggest actually learning musical theory and your scales.