Keep it up!

I like what you got so far. I also use FruityLoops so I know it can be weird getting into it. I do think that the patterns are a bit repetitive. Check out the premade songs, they can teach you a lot about pattern construction for quite a few genres. Could've used a deeper, driving bass line. Personally I would recommend using a synth instead of a premade bass FX, they tend to have a much richer sound. Use 1 or 2 layers for the base frequency, and try playing with the waveform a bit. Really good start for a nice trancy song, I dig it, keep on pluggin'!

Hi there

Its not bad remix. But the instruments you are using are pretty primitive. Have you tried using sytrus ? It has a lot of nice basses and syths and strings. You could also use it to make your own sounds. Or use the 3osc to create nice sound.
You beat is not really bad. About the high hats, just fill you whole line , and lower the volume of of the less important ones to create effects. You used you high hats like " tictictic .. paure ... tictic tic ". If you use them over the whole way , you'll have a more humanlike effect. Try not to stack reverbs and normals in numbers like this.

You melody is not bad. just the bells that you are using give a weird effect. They are kinda the wrong instruments in the wrong number if you know what i mean.

Anyways this is a good first attempt at Fruityloops. My first songs sucked waaaaaay harder than this.
If you need any help just PM me. I'll be glad to help you out. I like supporting new artist.
Sorry for not writing a lot of possitive ^^ but the review is already long enough as it is.

Greetz Duba

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