Really like this intro; the instrumental is very well done. I wish you had parallel compressed your vocals more to emphasize their presence in the song. If there were more variation between quiet and loud sections, I think the song would be more engaging. I can hear that the mid frequencies are competing with your vocals, which I find distracting. Overall, your song is good! The vocal glitch effect is very nice.

You have a good voice! I think you should practice more consistently and push yourself to add more variation in how you sing the chorus and the verse.

Wish the treble were mixed less harshly, especially at the high end. I think it would help to set up a consistent mixing and mastering template. Additionally, incorporating more bass and using mixing references, like Juice WRLD, could improve the overall sound.

@xxs4gexx, how did you get interested in music?