Inktober #16 - Halfway Point

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Inktober #16 - Halfway Point

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Just got off a call, though could've been on there till morning! I'm polishing up my English. I'm growing I'm transforming. I know I do these dues everyday, but to just talk? That's a sick feat. That's a method of mystery. That still feels off.

Anyway, I'm here to say the halfway point's today! @larrynachos made a beat, so I layered up my takes. I get impatient with the breaks, don't mind instrumental pause at all (sorry), I keep going anyway, just like I'll keep going tomorrow.

And borrowing beats from others (TY!) cause fortunately I've reached this borough, where everyone's up for collabos, which is awesome like avocado. Used to be my life was straight up miserable and somber but... I jest. But however it used to be it still gets viscerally better yet! Every October, with every folder, with every rec, with every sense of closure before I tired-eyed step from behind my desk and hope to sleep in... halfway point today y'all, we creepin'. Onward.

Lyrics: https://cyberd.org/inktober-16-halfway-point-lyrics.html

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phenorax

2024-10-18 06:23:43

Your lyrics are more gripping when you got some sounds as the base. Use the emphemereal and dreamlike tones when you philosophize, fresh as an Autumns morning. When you spit, use more hardhitting and gritty sounds with some somber backdrops sprinkled inbetween.

Cyberdevil responds:

Emphemereal huh, I'll have to use that word somewhere. :)

I wonder if this was more an analysis on what I do right here, or feedback on what I could do better elsewhere... seems that is how I do it occasionally, unintentionally, I haven't really had a method to the madness... it's useful to have the distinction mapped out like this. The difference in the ideal approach between the soft and dreamy and more gritty kind of spitting...

Appreciate the advice and/or encouragement phenorax!

SayMeBott

2024-10-17 16:06:22

Jay-Z might be jealous! :o

Cyberdevil responds:

I can only dream! XD Thank you Bott*!

Jabun

2024-10-17 04:36:10

Another great one peeps! Hardhitting beats which compliment the tight flows well. This one's impossible not to bob your head along to! Halfway there now, and Larry feels like you're on maybe a 1/3 of these already this year (loved the string sounds on this one btw) XD I gotta get in on the action! Hope that back's getting better CD!

Cyberdevil responds:

Thank you thank you, it is a groove ain't it! :) Hehe the fact that he's doing these daily too somehow has me jumping on way more than I usually do for sure, so many good ones! XD You definitely do, hope we get in that traditional collabo soon! Back's OK, thank you, seems there are no miracle cures though, just gotta keep working on it.