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Warcrimes || Pre-3. Dirge Exilii (Proto Demo)

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This is a proto-demo of what Track 3 would eventually become. It's entirely different than what it became but just for fun I figured I'd post it. Most of the lyrics I repurposed for the final version and even a guitar lick or riff here or there.


As with all the demos, mind the unpolished nature of the track cause IT AINT GREAT


[Intro]
I don't care what you think of me
The scars inside will always bleed

Unbroken,
Unshaken
You cannot take my pride

I'm Cursed
But Remain
My True Strength Lies Inside

Can't hurt me
Can't break me
You cannot change my mind

The mistake
My mistake
Flay my flesh I feel alright

[Verse 1]
Bring me to the front
Do what I'm told
Make a sense of place
Fulfil this role

Taking all the pain
Put it on me
Better that they don't live
Life like me

I can handle you
And my sins I
Take the burden
Innocence

Bleed another life
Take from me
A fraction of the
Agony

[Verse 2]
Even if the scars don't show it I'm whole
Absolution given I've paid the toll
Cannot let eyes of the sheep folk see
What the cruel hands of fate and family did to me

Casting devastation from a splintered battered form
I keep pushing forward, keep pressing on
Until the fractured pieces of my soul reform
I'll wear the mark of burden until I'm re-fuckin' born

[Prechorus]
Say sweet dreams cause
Tonight we die
Bleed to feed the ground
Let the scars define
Crack annihilate
What my blood designed
Every pound of flesh from me will
Bring peace of mind

Take from me
When I should be blind, e-
ternally
It will remind
Failure to survive those
ties that bind
Other than the one around my throat
Is where I draw the line

[Chorus]
Hotter than the surface of the sun
Denser than black holes
Hatred that combusts within the forge
that's inside my soul
Fueled by the suffering of my past
Tempered with control
None of it, None of it sutures me
Stitches ripping at the seams of the broken honor titles old

[Verse 1]
I don't give a fuck
What you think
Of punishment or heretics

Just another thing
Burdening
The shoulders of the ones in pain

Make another life
Return to me
The price for air is agony

Giving up the faith
The wretchedness is
All that is inside of me

[Verse 2]

I don't care what you think of me cause
The scars inside will always bleed
Sacrificial hooves for the weakest fold
Penance has been paid when they flayed me whole

Take away the right to be a part of my own family
Because they way they tortured me for subterfuge they did not see
I am unbroken now

[Prechorus]
Say sweet dreams cause
Tonight we die
Bleed to feed the ground
Let the scars define
Crack annihilate
What my blood designed
Every pound of flesh from me will
Bring peace of mind

Take from me
When I should be blind, e-
ternally
It will remind
Failure to survive those
ties that bind
Other than the one around my throat
Is where I draw the line

[Chorus]
Hotter than the surface of the sun
Denser than black holes
Hatred that combusts within the forge
that's inside my soul
Fueled by the suffering of my past
Tempered with control
None of it, None of it sutures me
Stitches ripping at the seams of the broken honor titles old

[Chorus 2nd verse]
I don't care what you think of me
The scars inside will always bleed
Flesh coagulates but souls have needs
The cold embrace of death would've set me free but
NO

[Breakdown Bridge]
Why am I alive
Why did I survive
Where is my prize
When does honor die

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Credits & Info

Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
7
Score
4.93 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 10, 2024
8:00 AM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
Song
9.6 MB
4 min 11 sec

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