Fantastic intro, very atmospheric with the piano, creating a strong emotional auditory narrative. I personally wish the vocals were more audible, as I couldn’t make out the words you're singing. You have a lot of talent as a singer.

I don't even know if people give a fuck about feedback these days. I do like your song. I think the vocals might work better with a style similar to how Mario Judah uses a yell-singing technique, like in 'I Miss the Rage' or Juice WRLD, where he blends a sing-songy, talk-rap approach.

@Rectxngl, how did you become interested in music?