this tells a story, isn't it?
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Inspired by C418
Made for my freakin religious studies homework to the sentence "In the Beningin- *ahem* Beginning"
Lore:
0:00 there is empty space. Nothingness.
1:05 a computer starts up, symbolising a new beginning ig
The rest is kinda deep maybe.
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I hope you enjoy!
(Also why tf is the first thing that comes up in tags when you type "b" boobs ,:/ )
I like the mystical sound it has, the atmospheres and layers are great, plus the tags are amazing hahahha
radon review baby. Let's get it:
This is a very unique start in comparison to what you usually make I must say. I like the ambient approach taken. I just wish that it was a tad bit shorter, or maybe the extra synths could start kicking in at 00:30.
I like the ambiance used at 1:05. Like it symbolizes a new day of sorts. 1:36 - 1:50's thing sounds a bit corny at first. Maybe if I could hear a callback to that at the ending piece, then that would be nice.
02:24's part seems almost a bit empty. Like it needs pads in the background or something along those lines. 02:56's melody is groovy as hell though. Nice job on that. The ending section starting at 03:11 is also nice and smooth. The keys make for a nice tranquil juxtaposition to the rest of the track.. Maybe the riser at 3:25 could be a little bit louder. Not by a lot though.
All in all, solid song. Definitely different from what you normally make. Could use polishing though. I rate it a 8.8/10.
P.S.: Goofy Section™ where
NotLeLee responds:
Its ALL goofy section :^D
With the 2:24 part i tried adding lil risers to add collage, I tried adding a pad but it was just too laggy lmao
I think i did otherdo the length of the starting chords maybe but oh well
ty for review
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