That's really good! I love the composition. The only complaint I have is the mixing kinda, except the vocals, those are mixed very good. Dude that's a vibe, keep it up, there is a lot of potential for this style!
Halló, allir!
This is my first song in English; it is not entirely in English though. I tried to make it really good and I think I succeeded! I like it very much; I hope to do more like it soon.
Lyrics/texti:
[humming]
I walked a path where shadows grew.
And faced the storms I never knew.
The nights were long, the sky was dark (himinninn var dimmur).
But one good day, I found my way.
I said to them, “I am okay.”
But through the pain, I found my spark (það mun finna mig).
Through every challenge, I found my way (þetta er lagið mitt).
I faced the night and embraced the day (hlustaðu á mig, takk).
With every struggle, I grew so strong (getum við gert þetta).
I learned to find where I belong (skattur, ég elska þig).
[EPiano solo]
I wandered through the fields of gray.
And chased the hopes that slipped away.
The skies were cold, the days were bleak (þessir myrku dagar).
But in the dusk, a light appeared.
I held it close, it drew me near.
And through the struggle, I grew unique (ég er mjög einstök).
Through every challenge, I found my way (þetta er lagið mitt).
I faced the night and embraced the day (hlustaðu á mig, takk).
With every struggle, I grew so strong (getum við gert þetta).
I learned to find where I belong.
[Speed doubles]
The sun shining, the skies are clear.
I found my path; my heart is sincere.
With every step, the world feels new.
I cannot feel more free, when I am with you.
[Speed slows]
I see the shadows from days gone by.
The echoes of a weary sigh.
The past will be with me for far too long (það mun ásækja mig.).
Memories haunt me where I once cried.
The pain I buried deep inside.
Reminds me of where I went wrong (hvar fór ég vitlaust).
Those memories bring the pain back (minningarnar eru slæmar).
[GPiano solo]
That's really good! I love the composition. The only complaint I have is the mixing kinda, except the vocals, those are mixed very good. Dude that's a vibe, keep it up, there is a lot of potential for this style!
If I am to be honest, I was going for complete experimental here, meaning I had absolutely no plan at all!
Thanks for the review :)
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