Hm...
I'm not a very big fan of breakcore, but here are a few advices:
-Firstly, you can lower the volume of the song a bit, so it'll be more enjoyable.
-Secondly, if possible, I'd like you to add some pad and reverb to the 0:11-0:14 section, as it's very empty by now...
- Finally, you can also change the current lead synth... to something more dynamic perhaps?
Other than that, it's a pretty delightful, energetic and overall a pretty nice song!