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ONE WITH EVERYTHING

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"Fueled by desire unlike any other. I only have one goal in mind." - One With Everything, in FLAME FULFILLED at the end of my novel I'll finish one day.


This is my submission for NGUAC 2024 Final Round in the Underdogs Division!


I put some (lots) of work in to this one, taking all I have learned so far, both from the judges and my friends and family who have listened to this. I'm glad to have finished my greatest work yet, and look forward to what I'll learn and make in the next one!


CREDITS:

Thank you @nerostratos for epic Demon Prince voicelines! The other voice is me!


i love u SillySeeker_Productions

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ALSO, here is my fl pattern proof, BIG ONE this time frfr

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I like the blissful melody at the beginning and the cute sound design. The mixing could be a bit sharper - it’s hard to hear some of the harmonies when they’re all playing at once. Make sure you assign all of the instruments a mixer track and, at the very least, add an equalizer to each one. None of the instruments besides the bass and kick should have any frequencies left below 250 Hertz once you equalize everything. Also, the drums sound pretty soft throughout - I’d suggest adding a compressor onto each of the drum kit instruments, and giving the snare in particular a boost in the middle-range frequencies in the equalizer.

Compositionally, the piece is stronger. The downtempo section at 1:59 was good for some variety, and the voice acting was solid. I think the vocals are a tad too loud relative to the instrumental tracks, though. The frantic synth line and faster tempo during the final minute was a good way of hitting the piece home. Overall solid work, WoogLord! Thanks for coming out to the NGUAC. Also, I can indeed confirm that all anime girls are Chargers fans. ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10

WoogLord responds:

Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm starting to work on mixing more, and EQ work was a tad above my paygrade when reading up on it for this haha. I'm going to watch/learn more on it and make some presets to not think too hard on it for the next couple tracks before I develop my tastes for frequency changes on instruments.

100% agree with all your comments, thanks again for the feedback!

I really enjoyed competing in NGUAC24, I learned a lot, and am thankful to the judges, TO, GOD, my family, my friends, and all Chargers fans (frick the Raiders)!!!

I just listened through all the NGUAC final entries and this is the last track. It makes for a really uplifting and celebratory end to my listening spree of what has been an insanely impressive final round. I really enjoyed listening to this song, and you clearly have a ear for a nice melody. If there was any constructive advice to give, it would just be that perhaps your music could benefit from diversifying things up a bit! Whether it's the chords, melody or instrumentation, or even just adding some modulations here and there, it would really take it to another level!! That's really just a small detail though, and I really enjoyed the overall positive atmosphere that you crafted with your song. It gave me all the good feelzzz <3

Good luck with the contest, WoogLord! :)

WoogLord responds:

I couldn't agree more! It's like you are reading off the list of things I want to work on for the next songs :)

Thanks so much EtherealWinds!

Sorry Asuka, but Rei is an Eagles fan!

WoogLord responds:

YOU TAKE THAT BACK!!!!

Credits & Info

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Votes
6
Score
4.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 7, 2024
9:00 PM EDT
Genre
House
File Info
Song
4.5 MB
3 min 58 sec

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