I like the quirky synth brass instrument at the beginning and the church bells on the downbeats. The melodies are catchy, although there’s a bit of dissonance at :32, and the percussion could come through clearer in the mix. I’d suggest mixing the percussion to include more mid-range frequencies, and also double-checking the equalizer in other instruments to make sure there aren’t so many low-pitched tones that are interfering with them. That might help make the percussion sound more distinct in the mix.
That said, I especially like the melodic contour at 1:01 and the cute, 8-bit breakdown at 1:26. This track is well-varied harmonically, and flows smoothly as well. It sounds a little too dynamic to fit into a video game soundtrack, but the sound design and flavor are certainly there. Overall, strong work here, Interloping! Thanks for coming out to the NGUAC. ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.75/10