The guitar reminds me a lot of Techock by Waterflame, what instrument did you use for that?

I like the beat, though the sudden pauses of the guitar at around 0:31 are a bit odd, I feel that could be improved with some tweaking. 0:47 has those weird dubby things that make the piece feel extremely weird and just super… wrong? Is that the right word for it? I personally if I wanted to add some form of dub thing, I would have used a GMS bass and made it that way with some equalizers and levelers, maybe some distortion as well.
And about the industrial ambience at 1:18, transitioning could’ve been put a bit better, even a simple cymbal would’ve been better than nothing altogether. The ambience itself sounds pretty cool and coulda used some more instruments, filtered scream samples could’ve worked wonders there, and would’ve made a more emotionally captivating section.
At 1:41, it oddly reminds me of my old 2024 song -The Gutters- my take on industrial music, but the way you used that weird whoosh dubby thing sound (im not sure how to describe it) just sounds weird and isn’t a good transition to the final segment of the song.

Overall, coulda been better, but I will tell you this, this inspired me to make more industrial songs, maybe when I reach my 400 fan special I’ll work on my industrial music skills! Decent work, keep it up ^_0

sweeet.