Music wise not bad and unusual. The mix needs much more high end.

Wut? Hello again
Good job, needs a little bit of mix

The start could use some reverb, but it does sound like a decent lead. The amen breaks are also very generic. Orchestral hits aren’t something you hear in a lot of drum n bass songs, though I think stretching them a bit and making them a bit louder could make a better representation to how intense you want this piece, sorta 0:59! Speaking of 0:59, I like the little slowdown you did, before bringing it back, and you don’t really hear rock guitars in DNB songs either, so it’s impressive how you were able to make it work!

I also like the wobbly bass around 1:41, gives it a VGM feel! I love VGM music!

Decent work! 7.7/10