WOW, you really went crazy there for 0:34 to 1:12. This is frontpage worthy, I love it!
My NGADMN 2024 Submission!
I have some awesome lyrics for this, but just didn't have the time or space to record them. Written for anyone that drives a truck or thinks big rigs and space are cool lol.
Thank you for listening!
WOW, you really went crazy there for 0:34 to 1:12. This is frontpage worthy, I love it!
Thank you so much!!!!! I really appreciate the feedback. Always makes my day :D
Really interesting sound palette you have going on here! When the synth bass comes in at 0:20 it's a bit distracting though -- sounds like it might be due to chorus or stereo spread. I would recommend rolling off the high end on it, since there isn't a lot in that range.
This would sound a lot better as a smooth ride, with a more pronounced bass guitar sound opposed to the synthy fuzz. I can't even tell whether it's a saw wave or a bass on part of the fuzz/crunch. It also sounds balanced left.
Maybe it's that I have ADHD but it's distracting me from the otherwise lovely arrangement and writing. Seriously, save this idea for a later date, because it slaps. (I don't mean take this down at all -- I'm very much a fan of redoing your own pieces)
I'm usually not a big fan of EZ-Drummer, but you've used it well here. I would only suggest to turn down the hi-hat volume a little. There's so little in that frequency range that it sticks out a tad.
The master is also quiet. See all those little peaks on the waveform? You can in all likelihood push this piece harder with compression. Do some light reading and experimentation -- see what you like!
7.7/10
Lot of stuff I didn’t even know I didn’t know, thank you for the feedback, a lot to consider!!!!
Even with the lack of lyrics this is still a really sick track to listen to! Especially that switch at 1:50. It had me banging my head in bed!
Great stuff and good luck on the competition!
That you so much for such an awesome comment! I really appreciate it!!!!!! I’m glad it got your head rockin!
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