absolute banger
An extremely last-minute entry for the NGUAC 2024 Knockout Round. Sorry in advance for the mix lol
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absolute banger
I like the catchy four-on-the-floor beat at the beginning. The airy pads at :33 are nice and dreamy, although the piece is pretty slow to progress, and you start overusing the “shake the earth” vocal sample in short order. The drop at 1:32 is catchy, if a bit minimal, and the post-chorus melody at 2:02 is nice as well. The synth at 2:41 sounds a bit harsh in the upper register - maybe you could soften it a bit in the EQ. The mix sounds a bit distorted once the pads come in at 4:42, but overall the production quality of this track is solid. I can hear all the instruments clearly throughout, and the frequencies are generally well-balanced. The second half of this piece in particular could use a lot more variety, though. The riser/faller combo at 4:00 was pretty catchy, but also didn’t really add much to the overarching progression of the piece. More harmonic layering and variety on the main riffs would really take this piece to the next level. Until then, it’s still really catchy and smooth-flowing, with some cool compositional details and decent mixing. Keep at it, TheMagBros! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7/10
this slaps i hope you win
I appreciate this dude, thank you!
I tell you with complete confidence that you will pass NGUAC this year!
one word: loud (I really liked though, great job!)
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