Indeed sounds thicc
Two things I wish:
One: that the track were mastered -- although it looks some compression may have been applied to the track based on overall waveform. If this is the case tbh I would throw it in Audacity and hit amplify and this is a quick fix for quiet waveform.
Two, the snare were more audible
Overall great groove and intonation on your playing. Love the chugs.
Also love the clunky bass tone. Sexy. I can't tell if it's been chorused but if so, I would bring the freqs below 180 or so hz on the bass into mono and emphasize some of the mids. Also, it sounds like you're quad tracking -- are you panning all the guitars hard left and hard right or no? If yes, try bringing them in a bit more. I'm feeling a weak center in the mix. Though perhaps some of that is the drums lacking presence. The snare in particular, I can only really hear the bottom rattle and the transients for a hair of a second.
Kick drum is also a bit out front relative to the rest of the kit. Cymbals are at about appropriate volume.
I also think for NG you could make a version which properly loops, or just punch in a final stinger note here and not loop the track.
I'm stoked to hear what else you come up with. Seriously great grooving.
76/100
BALDORF 
