Cool Concept.

Yeah, he's right about the kick every beat and hi-hat on the ands of the beats (the off beats). I assume you're still using FL? On the hi-hat track, try just mixing up the rhythm a little, even it's just clicking random squares. Oh, and where you have the hits at :50 and 1:00 ish, try making the synth follow the drum hits. That might sound cool.

Not bad.

You've got the right idea. The melody that comes in at :43 is beautiful. However, the whole quarter not kicks, off beat hi-hat, and the claps becomes really repetitive. It's done in nearly EVERY techno/trance song, and it bugs me. Try switching it up. A LOT. Also, the main melody needs to be varied more, and more instruments added to the song to give it more depth. I really liked the beginning though. Really made the song feel like it was going to build up, good job on that.

So, just try to vary this more, and you'll have a great song. But please, PLEASE, try to stay away from quarter note kicks. It would make me really happy = D

Nice beat!

Builds up slowly, and it is a bit too calm for this kind of style. Then again, it could be just me eating something loaded with sugar. Anyway, this is still good.