The first thing I notice is the lack of low end in your music and it makes the piano in the beginning really really jarring. A double bass or a low cello would do nicely. It sounds like the high end of your instruments have been spiked up or they might just come like that. I would probably take around 1000 - 3000 hz down a bit for the beginning piano. As for the composition, the ending could've been a lot more fletched out. The rhythm the piano is playing is kind of nice! Your melody of the oboe could use some work to match the chords better. Other than that, keep up the good work!
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This was the soul world theme for Lost Souls. The game was made during a game jam, so the game kinda sucks, but at least the music is good.
Malethar responds:
Yeah, I feel like adding a bass instrument would've taken away from the kinda lonely vibe from the game. Plus, it's a video game, so giving it an ending would be weird cause it's supposed to be a loop. I do agree with the high-end bit, my mastering software just blew up the treble and I just thought it sounded nice at the time. Thanks for the kind words!
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